A free verse poetry, “Like a Dead Weight.”
The most difficult decision to make in a relationship is to walk away, I’ve had to make this choice twice. Sometimes, things just don’t work out, or the level of the playing field changes. I became a victim of verbal abuse, thrown like rocks against a soft surface.
It penetrates. I catered to this negativity, thought all my love could save his soul, it didn’t change anything, only me. And when I was drowning in the bitterness of time, I looked into the mirror and saw my reflection. I had aged, with unhappiness written in lines across my face. With the last trip to the emergency room, suffering from hypertension and an anxiety attack that brought on a stroke. I could have died. I found me.
In this free verse poetry and digital art piece maybe you can see or feel the change of choices.
Free Verse Poetry: Like a Dead Weight
Like a dead weight, I felt it…
a heaviness bearing down on my heart; like the many times
of knowing what rocks felt like if you pack them far too long.
It felt awful. It anchored my soul.
(Anchored and not a dead weight.)
The yellow glow of words shared to you to encourage,
couldn’t change who you are.
My perceptive heart becomes aware of those same patterns; like pattering rain on a flat rooftop.
How I know of compilation
First, it’s just one. Then more adding like numbers getting bigger. bigger. Then, it eats away at your happy place; like weeds growing in a garden stealing color.
I couldn’t take it anymore. Today, I opened my heart and let the black crow free.
I hope you can find another resting branch.
A bluebird perched upon my branches today and sang.
And the trickling sun fingers touched my face.
I breathe long and hard and smiled for the first in awhile, life into mine soul again.
©Linda J. Wolff 2017
| Like a Dead Weight|
An urban free verse poetry
What is a Free Verse Poetry? Typically patterned by speech rather than meter, this form of poetry is very open to the author’s discretion and usually does not rhyme. Visual and sound effects are often employed. It can have as many lines as the writer wishes.
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He asked for a story about me, about losing something, about loss. In this free verse poetry, I lost a part of innocence, I saw love and hate hang from a wall inside a small chapel. I saw them slap GOD’S name on it to condone their rituals. It was wrong.
So I write this to you, Roderick Bates of Rat’s Ass Review. I’m walking you through this horrific day through these lines.
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This could also be an ekphrastic poem for The Ekphrastic Review, of describing the hearts hanging like dead weights.
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So happy things have changed for you. Let the bluebird sing! ^.^
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Yes, yes, yes.. And what a song too!
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A happy heart sings the best!
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Thank you for sharing the in-depth feelings of your heart. Sing, indeed you are alive for the sun shines on you today.
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Awe! Thank you for your lovely comment, Helene! Happy Friday!
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Writing and art…trhe healing combination. Beautifully painted words today.
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Yes. Indeed, Sharon! Happy Friday!
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How do you do that?
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I’m so sorry you went through all of that.
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It’s OK, Lynley! Its made me a better person! Happy Friday dear!
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Well I’m glad something came good out that situation! Happy Friday to you too!
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So telling and feeling.
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Thank you for good words And calming thoughts, We should chat ,meet up I’m in , Blog need assistance spreading Light I mean words to many folks Writing my words For Poetry Foundation ,book theft Me.
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Love your full of ,
sweet you are,
Don’t go far
Poetry Wolf
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It would be wonderful to converse over the soul.
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I too have suffered verbal abuse. It is crippling to the core especially coming from a person you truly love and adore. I am glad you are out and are doing well. Much love to you!
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It’s the worst when they are so close to you! Happy Saturday!
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Thank you. Happy Sunday 🤗
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I love it!
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Thank you, Abdulrafy! Happy Sunday!
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I’ve read your poem a few times now, and your associated introduction. Your words are very full of feeling, and quite soulful. And I’m also happy that you’ve survived your journey incredibly well.
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Yes, Ivor! It was challenging taking each day and turning into some better.
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Life can be very challenging, I too suffered a stroke, probably stress related, and then the rehab, wow, learning to read and write again, and to physically and mentally return again, and resume to my caring duties of tending to my wife… whoops best I stop… Maybe I’ll write my story one day, but for now my poetry is my story.
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That would be awesome!
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